I chose "sad" as my "mood" because Brett has messed up again. It's been a long time since he was such a pain, that I let my guard down, and I got burned. Things with him are changing drastically this weekend, and I'll discuss this more later.
Here is a draft. I took this pic of Brett in our little town, walking away from me. It makes me sad to see it, but it fits the message:
OK, I changed the name, town, school, etc to protect us from evildoers, and his last name doesn't match mine, so he's safe for now. PHEW! Please, be honest. Critique my announcement. I need help.
8 comments:
I like it!
I think it's beautiful! Well done, Rachel. Blessings, Penny http://journals.aol.com/firestormkids04/FromHeretoThere
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It's perfect!!
Your very creative; I like it.
In Christ,
Gabrielle
It's good you didn't put the date, place and time in this. I'd show up and yell: "Be nicer to yor momz yo!!". And I'd be drunk. And it would ruin the moment.
Russ
I think this looks great and that pic does fit right in with the announcement.
It gave me chills. You should be very proud of him making it through school. If i can get mine through it it will be a blessing.
My oldest if giving me a hard time big time.... Lazy lazy lazy.......
Take care :-)
I like it! The pic fits perfectly.
If you are looking for a couple of different 'effects' to try for fun, you might try changing the pic to black and white, or even making it 'old fashioned'. The creams and browns might make an interesting look.
I really like this.
Thanks!!
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